
( This poem was written while I was deployed to Iraq in 2006.)
The half-moon swells into
a phenomenal scarlet sunrise
sustained by indigo skies.
Against the heated horizon,
a deep, solemn mourning
reverberates longingly,
and the warm land's people
begin their graceful, harmonious bows.
Their ruminations intently
turned towards Mecca
with heads faced
piously down and palms laid graciously on knees
on an earthen mosaic of
hardened mud, smooth and jagged stone, and parched terrain.
Their eyes shut, drawing in the
sorrow and jubilation
of a long, proud heritage,
slick, onyx veins that thicken underneath furrowed soil,
silhouettes of rugged arcs
and smooth dunes that line vast, desolate tracts
once traversed by nomadic
tribes and shepherded flocks,
and their hearts absorb the
exquisite turbulence of the Euphrates flow,
as an utter stillness ensues.
The bold, austere shapes curl
into supplicating arches,
grey shadows impressed upon
alluvial, russet plains
rimmed with gaping stone mouths
that swallow,
fusing
the tragic, yet delicate song of the unplanted land into the intense
fabric
and opus of their strikingly
chaotic ancestry,
a myriad of deeply
embedded cultural faiths
clashing intricately within
borders once ruled by great sultans.
In the distance the momentum of
the prayerfuls' sad chorus intensifies and broadens,
and then dispels somewhere deep
in the heart of the desert sand.
In droves refugees flee
from their once captivating, war-ravaged homeland
fiercely clutching their
livelihoods by the strands of their hair and makeshift sacks,
the weight of years spent
watching their country crumble,
marked in the creases of their
brows.
Children
play hide-and-seek in the skeleton of a bombarded building,
streets usher a tangle of
cars,armored vehicles, and native amblers,
while veiled women hold their
infants and children close as they manuever briskly
through the throng of bodies
and smoke.
A semblance of normalcy teeters
somewhere between uneven market lines,
busy or empty shops,
broken homes, and inside sacrosanct mosques
where even the faithful
fear the hooded men more than their god.
In the distance down an
unpaved road where jaded and weary soldiers
lay concrete, mid-morning is
torn apart.
The earth seemingly splits,
buildings cave, and the air shatters.
Women pull their hair out by
the roots in anguish, hovering over husbands, motionless in the streets.
Children sob uncontrollably,
pulling at the garments of their mothers
as they breathed their last
breath, gripping dates from the market in their hands.
The wounded and suffering moan
and lament laboriously
while the beautiful facade
burns in shards.
Overhead the steppe
eagle and juvenile kestrel fly
where once lush, emerald
gardens were thought to have blossomed
This is amazing! Thank you for sharing it.
ReplyDelete-Chelsea
chelsandthecity.blogspot.com
Fantastic...
ReplyDeleteYou are very talented! it flows amazingly :) woo-hoo, I'll meet you soon then :)
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www.lilbitsofchic.com
i just found your blog via lara'svintage. your poem: We have such cultural differences, yet we are all still human, with the same needs and wants, desires. What a beautiful picture you have painted with words that have brought me to its landscape and the people that inhabit it.
ReplyDeletei also just post your blog on my fb page. Very inspiring. Txs!
ReplyDeleteLove this!
ReplyDeleteWow.. this is so hauntingly powerful. Your description of refugees and children literally gave me chills and made my heart ache...
ReplyDeleteThis is so very beautiful, and has so much truth.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your service!
How vivid and powerful words can be! I can only imagine how frightful, terrifying, melancholic it could be to be in the midst of war!
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