Sunday, January 27, 2013

Poetry corner: Ventura bikeride

random bikes on beach
(random bikes located in Coronado)

November 24th, Ventura
This is where my spirit lives,
alongside wide, open gravel roads,
through verdant, incongruous organic trails,
onto black, painted highways
spanning the livelihoods of old, young, sad, and happy alike.
The orchard fields dotted with sugary, ripened fruits
hand-picked by sombrero-wearing workers,
simple and humble, solemnly bending, picking, and rising
in a sweet, rhythmic dance with Mother Nature’s succulent jewels.

Pedaling faster, yet ever slower,
climbing with each bellow of rolling green hills,
sinking with each downward slope into sun-kissed plains,
filled with fields of husks hugging corn
or rows of soil cultivating cabbage patches,
some brown-skinned workers sitting, frazzled, on the road-side
hooting and hollering, proudly, as I fly by,
managing only to look back and wave hello
as I soak in all I can take.

In my quiet, smooth, planned breaths
a smallness overcomes,
and things begin to make god-awful sense,
riding past the curious commuters in their monster cars,
past the Pacific with her melancholy drawl,
dodging sharp, broken malt-colored glass and dented caps from broken bottles,
never pedaling to an end or to a rest,
pausing momentarily at civilization’s traffic lights and
red-and-white stop signs,
unable to break my incessant admiration;
I am stunned by the awe and power
of all that is around me.

*Please do not reproduce any part of my poems without explicit permission from me. Thank you.*

15 comments:

  1. Oh this is so awesome, i am enjoying this all to much!! <3 You are very good!

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  2. I love this! I'm so happy you're starting to share poetry! I used to write poems a lot more, but I haven't recently. And I'm very shy about it. So, props to you! This is beautiful!

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  3. Beautiful and more than that!
    -S

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  5. So lovely. :) I used to write poems, but haven't had anything to say lately. Maybe I'll start again someday.

    Thanks for the comment! x

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  6. Beautiful poem!

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  7. This is wonderful! Thank you for sharing your poetry. It can be such a personal thing. :)

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  8. nice post!love your pics!
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  9. Beautiful. I wish I could write poetry.

    xo Ashley

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  10. So very lovely =) You have a beautiful way with words...you are able to paint a picture and place your reader right next to the brown-skinned workers =)

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  11. oh my goodness, you wrote this?? it was so beautiful and kind of peaceful all at the same time. i had to read it twice

    xo Marlen
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    1. Why thank you, Marlen! And, of course, I wrote it, but I wrote it several years ago!

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